Voted For: OneStepBeyond

Black:
whoa where was the creativty i felt as if you had nothing your stucture was weak your vocab was weak your punches were weak theres no multis there was nothing but basic rhymes and flow to it the punches is what you need for battles and yo had nothing but just words and words about him like damn do somin creative. pz

OneStepBeyond
not the best but your stucture, vocab and all that shit is way more better your punches were way more creative and had the hit to them and made him feel bad to me in my opinion word, but keep workin on shit doin your thing you'll get better but you got my vote you won this prob too. pz

RTF in my battle verse speats links in the sig pz