Buck decent verse.. a couple good multies, wordplay was alright, good flow and consistency you get a 8/10

Hood dawg your verse was wack.. first off try countin ya syllables

You make one line long with a ton of syllabels and the next one short with half as many syllables.. if you just even that up you would be decent..

Example:

u just the patient and i'm the fuckin' orthadontist << 14 syllables
and i swear ta god i'm bein' honest << 10 Syllables


^^ 4 syllables might not seem like a big thing, but if you try reading that bar it sounds so wack, even the lines up, there is no flow in that bar either..youll get way more props from respected Open Mic heads if you keep ya lines close to even


you thought you had me you coulda sworn it << 10 syllables
but i sting back harder like a fuckin hornet << 12 syllables

^^ that bar is better, closer syllable count and the flow is good, u go right from the first line to the second line with dope flow

Just constructive criticsm.. take what i said into account.. that will help you out in open mics and battles

overall you got a 4/10

work on ya shit and youll be dope

pc

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