Voted For: Cincanatus

Normal Punches-Cincanatus, overall your punches were pretty good. Kept coming every line and most hit decent. Linguistics, your punches were rather weak and unoriginal (bloody ish).

Personal Punches-Linguistics, you definately got this. I liked the recording line and no show line. Should have kept em coming. Cincanatus, had some personals, but they were worded bad and seemed like you were reaching out for it.

Metaphors-Cincanatus, decent metaphors. I liked the secretary line most. Linguistics, no real metaphors. You need to work on that.

Multiple Rhymes-Linguistics, mostly for having them. Kind of threw off your flow though. Cincanatus, no multis that I saw.

Structure-Cincanatus, just easier to read and better looking. Linguistics, I hate the ..... crap. If it doesn't fit it doesn't fit.

Flow-Cincanatus, nice flow through all of this. Your constant punches kept it moving. Linguistics, your flow was rather choppy and hard to follow.

Word Play-Tie, both didn't have good wordplay.

Cincanatus, overall this is one of your best battle verses I have read. Your personals have improved, along with your punches. Try to include all aspects of a verse, wordplay, multis, etc...

Linguistics, personals were good and were pretty funny. However, your verse didn't offer much to the table and your punches and metaphors were bad. Your "wordplay" wasn't that great either.

No Hate Just An Honest Voter

v/Cincanantus

One Vote .One Battle. One Victory

Vote disqualified for suspected d/r.

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