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Old 03-06-05, 12:59 AM   #17
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Voted For: Cincanatus

good battle here chums, this is how i see it

cincanatus....thought you came real strong, had nice punches and personals in there, wordplay and vocab were aight....just flow and structure were a little off in some areas, 2nd last bar seemed a little stretched, but you still came on top

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Say Virginia Got No Basements? Well Ain't That Where Ya Located
Contradicting Ya Self, Like Miss Understood Sentences Translated
^that shit was tight, same with finisher, thought those were the ones that hit hardest

Linguistics....thought you came out a little weak, some punches were definately played, verse lacked complexity...had a weak opener, flow and structure were nice though, no problems there, just thought cincanatus had the harder punches/better wordplay and vocab.....but you did have a few nice lines....

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u worse than I thought, need a clue, circle this loss
he been on my dick so long, even my purple rubbed off
^^fuckin laughed at that shit...

good battle but v/cincanatus
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