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Old 03-06-05, 01:03 AM   #30
Wickedclown
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Voted For: C.A.L.I

aight.... its like this... good battle by both of yall.... so here is my break down:

Cali- first off i liked the beat... it was pretty good... umm... flow needs work cause it was off in most places... you disses were great tho... clevar.... you had some dope personals that were fairly creative in ya verse with some nice wordplay... overall your lyrics were quite nice.... 7.5/10

Pair- aight your verse was pretty dope... i loved the flow.. it flowed VERY WELL... i can tell that you put a lot of thought into it... disses were ok but could have been better.... lyrics were not as good as calis and i belive that that hurt you... cali had better wordplay as well... but i did indeed like your verse... just needed some help with lyrics... 7/10

aight this was a VERY CLOSE BATTLE... but in my opinion calis verse won this with better lyrics and wordplay... his personals and even vocab took this......no hate to Pair but this is how i see this one.... good battle by both of yall fa sho......


VOTE- Cali