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i felt as if you didnt quite have the greatest stucture and flow it looked long and some of the rhymes were almost forced but not really it might have been ur grammer the emotion was very weak the imagery was very great tho and i got where you were going with your verse but try working on your stucture and flow it fell mad off the vocabulary was very great tho i was feeling that..peace
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you changed the topic a bit but i understand what you were trying to say the vocab was very great your stucture was super dope and your imagery was very well done the way you dissed the gurl or w/e i kinda laughed some parts and the emotion you had was unbleieveable i was feeling that ish alot, keep it up this was very well done...peace no hate to anyone here
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