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Old 03-06-05, 01:35 AM   #10
High-Dro
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Voted For: TheFlowIsSick

Flow-nice structure and flow, really smooth flow...really nice punches and metaphors...i liked the 2nd bar best:
"And I'll stomp you till my feet hurt, Actually nah, Look chump
Im sick enough to break ya arms and make you do push-ups"
that would fucking suck..anyway,

hood_dawg - i didn't like how short and choppy your lines were, it's harder to follow that way, and i feel that it made it harder to throw in personals..your vocab was ok, but u didn't have any lines that really stuck out and i feel that's whut wins battles...dont worry, u'll def elevate tho. cuz u can rhyme

overall, TheFlowIsSick took it in my opinion...nice flow and personals with lines that stuck out...keep rhymin both of u

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