Voted For: Cincanatus

Cincanatus

Opener
"Mad Bitch" Coz I Threw Him Off His Bike, And Ripped "Off His Chain"
Now He Aint Going No Where, Like School Kids In A Deans Office Mayn
^lmao,nice opener

Middle
You Still In The Stage Imagining You'll Beat Me Like Disney Shows.....
He's Mad Coz, Being A Mod, Doesn't Mean He Can Get Some Votes....
^lolz,good one...

I'm No "Vet" But I Know Dogs Can't Rap And That's An Established Fact
Your Internet Connection Is For Girls, That's The Only Way He Interacts
^rofl,mad funny

Kid's From England But We Can't Understand Him, Like He Speaks Spanish
You Was Done My Friend Way Before You Dared To Accept My Challenge
^hehe,nice nice

Closer
Will The Rest Of Rap Verse Ever Know, You Pm For Votes? Or Is It Just A Mystery?
Man Fucka Waisting A Good Closer On An Dog, Like E Looch You Anceint History
^tight closer

Dope drop man, stayed consistent with hardhitting punches and personals that totally ripped his ass! Laughed with this stuff,good funny things and vocab was tight as well. Structure's nice and had your flow on lock. But the content of these punches and personals was strongest aspect of your verse, enjoyed reading this! Tight piece...


Mad Dog

*Long Time No Merkin...Better Start Now*

Ya exert ya stress in the wrong direction,
This' so little a challenge...his name i won't mention,
^good opener

Whats the matter? have i ruined ya complection?
U lookin red wit envy or is it from all these questions?,
^okay okay

1 suggestion...take ya 50% record out my face,
U got a 1/2 ass chance so ya lyrics i wouldn't waste,
^decent bar

Slap you back in place bitch you so disgraced,
You changed ya name so much, you don't even know ya face!,
^aight

Don't mean to offend ya but this will hurt ya cranium,
You can't get a crowd on they feet in an all standin stadium,
^funny closer

*Merking over & cob webs dusted*

Okay,you had good punches in there,not too played and some personals but they weren't always as hardhitting compared to Cincanatus's verse. The vocab was tight as well as structure,was feeling your flow. I felt you could've dropped much harder but overall this was an decent verse but not good enough to beat Cincanatus. It's like he tried bit more, put more effort into it...maybe you underestimated him or something I don't know but I saw much better stuff from you before, that's for sure...no hate...

Please RTF...http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=177089, thanks.

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