Voted For: LexiKon

LexiKon

Lyrics I recite diminish your inner light makin you lose sight of this microphone fight,
Hoverin over you dark as night I release my might while the pencil lays down to write,
This is an easy win like eminem battling bryan mc knight fear is fear but im bringin you fright,
definately feeling the first line, 2nd fell of a little but the 3rd was dope,like the fear-fright thing,nice way to open


Best advice take the next flight tonight to avoid getting destroyed I take away your man hood like a stereoid,
I toyed in your nervous system like Sigmund Freud finding your deepest inner void,
^hehe,good wordplay and stuff,nice creativity as well,liking this


Aurora doesn’t shine bright at this time of day ,

THE CAUSE:

I found the off button on his passive matrix display and pecked at it like a bird at prey,
I’ve stolen his solar energy flipped it on him to be his enemy causing him to look away,
^lmao,shit is making me laugh for sure,love how you describing this so good and dissing him at the same time!


Your skills affected when you least expect it due to leaving them unprotected and injected into an elected subjective,
Used my mirror and reflected his own light leaving him with a crooked linear perspective
^hehe,dope closer for sure!

I love your writing style, something different and nice to read verses like this for a change. Had good hardhitting punches and personals, mad creative as well. Vocab was impressive, had your flow on lock with the multis and internal rhyming (that shit's dope!). Tight drop man!
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Aurora

better be a fast runner, since terminating you gives me no honors
battling me's a big bummer, I can use you as decoy for pig hunters
^okay opener

genetic engineering won't stimulate u, damn I'll eliminate this twitch
didn't know u have a ghostwriter, I thought u was walking a bitch!
^hehe,nice nice,laughed with this one

your every single, rhymes are not meaningful, everyone goes LMAO
you're going to need a aspirin...and I thought wackness are painful
^funny stuff for sure

I'm the one respected well, fail and I bet that you'll be sorry as hell
don't say oh well, it will probably my tax that's paying for your cell!
^okay, nothing too special but decent[/b]

talent...I know you lack this, fact is I'm on your side so respect this
I'll get rid of my positive factors...only if you switch off your wackness
good closer

Okay, you had good punches in there but not really any bold personals. Your vocab was good as well as your structure, was also feeling your flow. Had some multis in there which was a nice add-on. Some of the lines were a bit played but overall you managed to put some creativity in there as well.
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In the end my vote goes to LexiKon because I'm feeling his style a bit more and he had more creativity in his lines...no hate...please RTF: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=177089, thanks!

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