Voted For: .Evolution.

meh, nothing special.....heres how i see it

evolution....you had the better punches in this one, harder ones at that, but still they were weak, and you used "whack" in all of them, you established that he was whack in the first punch, move onto a different personal, and your structure is a little stupid, keep it consistent.....flow was nice, had that on....wordplay and vocab needs to elevate, still pretty "whack", alot of shit coulda been worded better for more efficiency........but overall, you stayed consistent with insulting him, and your punches were better.....but dont get all excited cause you still need to elevate

riddlemethat....you need alot of work, no offense, but your punches/personals are very weak, i would suggest reading the tutorials, cause your punches aren't really specific, in your case, your merely just stating random things, not really dissin' your opponent, so you need to work on getting the hang of punches/personals......but on a high note, you did have good flow, structure was decent (i'd lose the slashes after every line though) and your vocab was decent.....so, keep elevating man

v/evolution

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