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Old 03-06-05, 03:06 PM   #18
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this was a one-sided battle here
schema - you had some aight punches, none really were
that hard & some connected, the flow was pretty basic
and the structure expcept 1 line was aight here, but overall
you had an aight drop though

holly - you need to work on ur punches cuz them shits were
pretty weak there, only a couple landed, & the flow was wack
cuz that jus made ur structure off balance, overall for you
elevate more
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