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Old 03-06-05, 05:10 PM   #4
MjGrEeN
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Posts: 192
From: England
IP:

Yo, fuck my record..skill ‘shines in my lines’
Your ass has ‘been done’…cuz I ‘lease your rhymes’/

Your job is ‘excruciating’…like you mom got ‘nip n tucks’
You must be mad, your moms a ho…she ‘blows’n’sucks’/

I’m a ‘cracker’ but your ‘whacker’….than your job, ’fudge packer’
Your girl, you must ‘smack her’…shes depressed…’snorting crack cuz of ya’

You know my ‘name’ cuz I own this ‘game’…I get a ‘buzz off fame’
You can’t spit fire….yet your breath's hot and you're 'slain'

You say you a ‘heavyweight’…yet you the ‘lighter fighter’
You protend to be ‘black’…But aint nobody ‘whiter’

My lyrical ‘innovations’ cause ‘rhyming vibrations’
Yet I tossed the ‘temptation’ to give your girl ‘sexual sensation’


Tossed the temptation-alliteration.
Verse has half multis all over and a full multi line (finishes buzz of fame)

Its got personals and there are metas there to.....
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