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Old 03-06-05, 05:12 PM   #18
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Voted For: J-Money

i dunno, this is how i see it

KoolB....thought you didnt come that hard, and it showed cause your punches were that strong....you had good creativity, but poor wordplay and structure made them a littl weak...some lines were a little played...and alot of lines coulda been worded a little better....flow was a little off in the middle.....yeah, so, didnt get my vote because your punches and wordplay were weaker, and didnt stay consistent with your verse

j-money...thought you had better defined punches, and better structure/flow and wordplay which helped add some more effectiveness to your punches......some lines seemed a little forced, and you should upp your vocab a little.....but you still get my vote....whird

v/j-money
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