Voted For: Os1ris

meh..heres how i see it

hex
>At least try to make a 5-5 record the playoffs will be here with the 500 percent
He the star player on his team has the most time yea riding on the bench
-little stretched, not really a punch, poor wordplay 2/10
>Os1 cant swing most of his punches are like hollow tips bullets full of air
Got the boot out of a established crew because it wasnt no room for homos there
-not a bad personal, still wordplay is whack 4/10
>His verse been in a 12 round fight with Ali because all his bars are stretched
Light weight with light weight i can push him around he weighs less than what i rep
-uhh, no, stretched, poor wordplay, forced, played 2/10

overall: 8/30...no hate or nothing, but you need to elevate alot, it can be forgivin cause its probs your first battle, just spruce up on things in the tutorials, cause you stretch your lines too much and you dont really have the idea of punches yet, so yeah, keep at it

os1ris...wasnt that great either
>Hexa’s a newby muhfucka… shit talk gets you geeks ate quicker
I set the bar; your just pressin for a loss like weak weightlifters
-meh, weak, first line was worded poorly....5/10
>You’re a lie like ya location.. dogg ya spits aint good enuff for da booth*
Fuck ya spits, im aimin to knock the knowledge out ya wisdom tooth
-not a bad punch here...6/10
>The only hex around here is your lame ass is present at this board..right
This guys lame the proof ….. who welcome themselves to rap sites*…
-not a bad personal, set up was dumb 5/10

overall: 16/30....you got this because you attempted more punches and they hit fairly well, but your wordplay and vocab need to upped, alot, cause it was rough reading it, which also threw off your flow, so keep elevating man....got the right idea down

v/os1ris

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