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Voted For: Ambient
This was a pretty good battle..
.Grafh. is elevating..
But this is how i see it..
let me make this quite clear, ur wack, and im being serious
to spot the wack in you is easy, just look between the periods
but wait, bottom of the barrell isn't to suit this wack thing
coz your ready for the top... of your head to be smashed in
fat shit, tryna fuck with me? well here is where i end you
beating me? now that IS a tall order
its just unfortunate for you, this^ aint no food menu
^ Those KILLED it.. the best lines in this battle..
But uhh.. on the whole Ambient had good connecting punches.. pretty good personals.. just an overall pretty good verse..
Ya got 2 wins 0 loses,but "cuz"mos" of ya wins is wack
Ima "ambient" dis battle and send it straight ta my stats
^ That had an attempt to connect hard..
But on the whole .Grafh. had more played lines.. stay away from dick and cum lines man.. There is no creative way to word that kind of shit.. And also stay away from links, those are beyond played.. Just overall work on your concepts.. Nice attempt, and keep elevating.. Youve gotten better from the first time ive voted on your shit.. Keep at it..
But for now,
Vote - Ambient
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