Needs a bit more hiss protection. Lyrics were pretty nice. Rhyme scheme varied which needless to say was good. Same for the flow. It fell off literally once out of the whole first verse. Twice in the second - but the track was nice man. If I hadn't heard the original I'd have been on this one pretty hard. One of the few cats on this board that sees the big picture. Track dosen't stand out as far as content goes - but it's still a good track. Keep up. 1

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