Engineer / Club Promoter
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IP:
You need a new mic. Flow was was pretty on point - but needed variance. I got bored really quickly into it. You rhyme A LOT like "mama mia" form No Limit. In your production quality - it's easy to see that you record your verses in pieces like 4 bars at a time, which dropped quality big-time. Lyrics were okay I guess. Maybe there's personals there that I couldnt' connect with - but it didn't seem real impactful IMO. Seemed more liek a casual diss track than a full-on battle.
Once agian, your fade outs are the god of ass fade-outs. That abrupt stop shit is kid shit - you can def do better. It takes no time to correct any of the problems in this track. All in all not a hard-hitting diss track. Just "okay". Def seen better from you.
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