meh, it was okay, first verse was choppy, real choppy, thought you kinda forced the multies in there......but you really picked up in the second and final verse, was feeling the flow, and the imagery coming out, so yeah, not a bad piece right here, nice one to go out on
so what you waitin for, the part? where i finish the verse,
so you can read it again and again until you remember the words,
sendin some curves from the plate when i assemble my verbs,
and pronouns, cause i throwdown before you assemble a verse
^best lines right there..word...nice drop

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