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Bangs like bikini attol
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IP:
Eh.. Vocals sort of seem pasted on top of the beat..
Flow wasnt really working for you.. And it didnt really own her at any point of the track.. You need to work on your owning skills cause I really cant see her getting the slightest bit embarrased from anything said in this track.. The adlibing at the end was kind of weak and forced out too..
Oh..............
And somehow I dont believe that you wrote and recorded this in 2 hours.. Cause from my own experience your not a very fast writer.. Maybe next time seven..
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