i like this, i was feeling it man, perfect flow (if there is such a thing), structure was on....last two verse, i dunno, wasnt feeling as much as the first two, thrid one, actually, was good, but your cross-over to the last verse, didnt think there was that good of flow, if you know what i mean.....like, you had good passion/emotion in the 3rd, but it kinda died off and the last verse was a little mediocre compared to the other ones.......but a solid overall drop, really goood actually....keep up man

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