Okay okay, this type of poem has been done so many times before but I still enjoy reading them because of the pure emotion. Found good balance with your vocab, not too much imagery. You said everthing just how it is, sort of "in your face", bold attitude. Next time, try to get some different levels in your poems, describe them in a more mysterious way so the reader has to think what you are saying in fact.

But this stuff has potential for sure, should've added a 3rd possibilty cause those two are kinda extremes lolz but since I'm such a sweet girl I'll say 'dope' . Just keep going and you'll get better for sure...Keep at it!

DQ

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