listenin as I type.. beat is kinda weird, first verse, flows fine to the beat, but seems like it lacks energy or something, like its takin all the emcees energy to keep the flow moving, not horrible, just seemed like it could be improved with some more practice- chorus, or singing is arright, not my type of shit, but it dont make it bad... second verse i think sounded alot more comfortable than the first, vocal range was better, prescence was slightly improved- i dunno what it is, maybe its just me... iunno.. not my type of song but it wasn't bad either... keep droppin.

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