step away from the mic.. it sounds like its down your throat, rhyme scheme is extremely simple, lyrics are o.k, but i saw nothing special in this track, I expected something half decent from all the shit you talk, but nah, you really need to work on sounding comfortable on the mic... you need help mixing it, cuz it sounds like shit as far as clicks/pop/distortion go, and I think your writing is sub-par... keep droppin.

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