haha, i was laughing in there, some good lines, yeah, structure and flow are the two big aspects you need to work on, your coming up with some nice stuff, but you keep stretching lines and not keeping a consistent structure, that can take away from the overall effect of your drop.......but some real good lines in there, haha, keep up yo.......................and to clear things up bout my name...its Kess, but with an extra 'e'....

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