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Old 03-07-05, 05:37 PM   #9
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Voted For: static

static.. nice creative punches.. eh on the personals but over all i liked urs more it was witty at points. you had a much better opener and closer.. nice vocab to ..

Jus like yo name, you're wack, so don't you jump-it
And you blow more than a little kid equipped wit a trumpet
Yo rhymes, we'll never bump-it, cuz in rap, you're jus a rookie
I'm allergic to cats, that means you, you fuckin' pussy
eh alright lil stretched but i like it 4/10
If this battles a game, wit points, I'd win this shit by thirty
Bruise yo body black and blue, like a Duke road game jersey
decent 5/10
Yea, it took me 3 days for me to come and drop my verse
I did so you could have false hope, and make the pain worse
eh coulda been worded better but nice 3/10
12/30






This chumped wanted to battle me man....hoo-ray
man i knew he wack thats why i gave him two days
Im aiming for you only so you can call it a solo-shot
not that i hate ya..its thats ya more fake than robo-cop
Ill drop tsunami's on this bitch coz he's plauged wit lies
This battle is over so you may as well WAVE good-bye
you shouldnt u've entered da forum..u shouldve layed of
coz jumping head first in a fire only way youll stay hot
Some should put n end to him n swipe his mic
Coz all of his raps are worthless just like his life!


ok i won't evaluate this one.. you need to work on your vocab his was short but packed more punch.work on that and learn metaphors better

nice drop on both sides...

vote//Static

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