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Voted For: .Grafh.
.grafh. you took this one easy.. your opener and closer were alot better than his.. i liked ur vocab. and alot of your wordplay there were no lines i really wasnt feel'n it had a good flow. and your metas and personals werent all that bad
6/10
aka nightfall... wow you need alot of work.. your whole structure was off. your vocab wasnt all that good either.. your punches were weak.. my suggestion go and read battles and looks for help in the tutorial threads no hate jus elevate
Vote//.grafh.
rtf links in the sig... honest votes only please
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