Voted For: J DOT
I topped ya hits, You talked slick, But i rocked ya scripts
You better than me? Yet You scared to put NOK at risk
No exceptions, Saying that J DOT got a chance just aint right
Ya verse wont do the trick, Like magicians with stage fright
And i know you afraid to battle me, I had you scrambled like eggs
You wanna break-fast, But ya wont when i dismantle ya legs
Take ya verbs and split, A battle with me ya dont deserve it bitch
Cuz you couldnt 'spit fresh', Even after swallowing 'certs or mints'
Gotcha shook, Lookin in amazement, Shit on ya rapbook pages
Edit your verse, Nah, Replace it, Dont forget to save the changes
decent vocab alright punches and metas .. i liked it but it wasnt at j dots level.. 5/10
IP:
Look dude, ask about DOT, they say he’s rude
Cause I’m da nigga leave you smushed in like baby food
Pay ya dues, get cleared off, or you can get NOK’d out
Slugs clap at ya gums to make ya grill pop out
And I aint focused on ya chest, you don’t use that to rhyme
Instead….I’ll crack ya egg like its Easter Time
You wanna be too tall, ya similar to Rue Paul
When da beef is on you move out like U-Haul
Scary nigga, get smoked like a pack of Ports
My trigger finger itching like it got genital warts
The Flow’s sick? Stop there you got no room to boast
Cause closest you ever came to beef was meatloaf
JDOT not scared, you don’t succeed when you mug
And you cant ‘son’ nobody, cause you could barley get it up
You talk so tough, but really you got no guts
I’ll leave you in a box, like takeout at Pizza Hut
You want what? Speak my name, tha flow leave you sick
And yo Open Mic’s abandoned, nobody replied in it
You spit sick, DOT give you da flu wit no antidote
I’ll blast at ya punk ass, and cut u open like cantaloupe
nice opener and closer.. it was a nice read alot of witty punches.. nice vocab.. nice flow.. your structure was key.. over all i thought you took this one because you kept the punches coming.. 7/10
over all jdot took it he jus had better vocab and punches i thought.. dot you had a llil to much self glorfication but otherwise nice drop
Vote//J dot
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