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Old 03-07-05, 06:17 PM   #6
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Voted For: Non Capisco

*read rules again to make sure it aint a whack battle* nah, just playing, heres how i see it

NC....thought you had some nice stuff in there, but overall, alot of it came off really weak....not bad vocab but it can be upped a little, wordplay, you kinda fell short in this category, cause alot of the lines coulda been worded a little better.....but overall on this battle, your punches did come harder than phives whack piece......keep elevating man, your shits getting better....

phive...i dunno man, you came weak here, had poor vocab and wordplay which really made it boring to read.....had bad structure and flow...stretched lines......personally, i didnt think you came close here man, you gotta elevate alot still, on everything, no hate...but your verse was weak

v/non capisco
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