i was feeling the 2nd dude more................as far as voice, he needs to lose the rhyming fam three lines a row though..........I couldnt understand the first kid to much........the beat is real timberlandish, but not bad....................shit was hot, but you might want to drop a hook n there, maybe just maybe. if you did you could market the song better, overall a good drop, hit me back
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