aight yall. my mind works deeper than most so yes this is the thoughts i'd be thinkin. if its too comple for u to understand, then dont penalize me for it. DONT VOTE. i figured it would be better if i spitted from my real thoughts. so here they go...

My body submerged in this water is nothing. My soul’s been drownin in sorrow for years/
So I leave this frigid world as an adolescent who fronts about having no fears/
But I do have fears. Like how my father took out his rage on his child of the oldest age/
And used five fingers to beat his face, then sat and laughed as he bleeds in pain/
Then this ten year old became a man and used my newfound brains to extract revenge/
Asked my dad to move with him and made his and his wifes life livin hell for months on in/
So I ask u why would I have any thoughts on losin my air circulation to H2O?/
I’ve died before, I’ll just come back once again and make my presence known/
I tote the spirits of the young and the old as i enter the soul of the mighty god Poseidon/
and face the embrace of the most un controlled substance since the Watts riots/
wrap myself in chains to keep my instincts restrained as i enter this saturated domain/
see only God can judge me, and only his son can relate to my pain/
i wonder what my mom will think when im gone, the unepected death of her youngest kid/
Cant be a whole lot since she doesnt thihk that much of me as i live/
16 years old, girlfriend's already got a kid and mine's soon on the way/
at least he wont grow up and have a rageaholic father like me/
and its likey, that i wont be allowed to die if i drown in this moment of time/
cause i've spit verses at God too, so i might've pissed him off wit my rhymes/
so fuck it, here goes nothin, im soon to be dumped into the ocean blue/
time halted for 20 lines in my mind to let thoughts go through...
~Yung Duke~

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