Voted For: A_M_H

i was diggin amh's verse here, liked thw wordplay, especially the "fallin behind" line, that made me laugh

punches hit hard, though the liftin a pound line is kinda played

tight rhyme scheme, good multi's... i think the lines were almost stretched a couple times, but otherwise it was an alright flow

ministry, it was a good attempt, but your rhyme scheme is wayyy too elementary, and you had no wordplay or metas... multi's werent there... punches were played and had no creativity whatsoever

work on a better structure and your meta's and you should elevate in no time

return the favor with honest votes, links in sig

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