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Voted For: riddlemethat
riddlemethat- decent drop your gonna get this one because i didnt get fuck'n lost half way through your rhyme... i'll explain in his// but yea up your vocab .. but i thought u had some half decent lines .. by far the funniest one was.."You the Will Hung of rap, and the midgit of basketball//
The arthritis of athletics and the wart of genitals//" that shit made me laugh o yea take off the //"<-- at the end its pointless
7/10
evo.. damn man your structure was all over the place haha.keep it simple. your things didnt match .. i read it twice. and i understood your punches but damn man loosen up on the structue.. over all though your comp had harder punches and personals thats why he is gett'n my vote.. i did like your opener though
vote..//riddlemethat
rtf its in the sig
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