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Old 03-07-05, 08:11 PM   #10
metaman
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Voted For: Lil C

i was feelin the punches, wordplay, and vocab in this verse, clever shit here. lines were stretched which fucked up the flow a little bit, but overall i thought lil c's verse hit harder, couple of multi's thrown in there, but you can elevate on that...

carson that was a good verse you dropped there, decent punches... you can elevate on the wordplay though, and try to keep your lines the same length, that'll help your flow

overall this was a decent battle and i was feelin both verses, but i think that the creativity in c's verse makes me give it to him

vote: lil c