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Voted For: CarsonJet
You shoulda known, You shouldna stepped, An now ya Owned,
I win...5-0..To sum unknown....Ghetto'Oompa Loompa Clone
^^one of the reasons you won
that was by far one of the funniest lines i have ever read in a battle hahaha.. but yea carson your structure is wack as shit but u still took it with better wordplay and vocab. it was a lil basic but not bad
lil c--- eh you had your metas and all that shit but it was weak as hell. read the tutorials and shit they helped me alot..you had potential but u didnt have alot of good personals or punches and things seemed played
both of ya work on your structures...
Vote//Carson Jet
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