I peeped this last nite, but I will check it out again....................i always liked the beans song so lets hope you didnt destroy it....................vocals to loud..............almost annoying loud...........your flow is off, you stop and pause, don't kno if you mean to but your not flowing it out, its like your readin it, your not rapping it. not hating just stating what i hear...........when that beat plays, it is sick, your vox are just too loud..your 1st verse was ok, the hands of time line was ok, kind of played, but it fit the spot..............WOW, your 2nd verse comes in way to loud, just turn them down and you should b alright, might want to memorize it so you dont have to read it either. not a bad drop, but needs work, not hating on ya, do ya thang, but just work on your flow

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