yeah somethings wrong with the hook like was said.... im not gonna hate on you, I just feel like to hop on this beat and be able to kill it you need great production cuz your not including any of the vocal samples in your verse, and the beat don't have the impact that it does in the original track... verse wasn't a bad verse lyrically, I just dont think it was for this track- sounds like you just need more practice infront of the mic and in mixing it down and you could make some good quality tracks... second verse i heard you incorporate the first vocal sample... but yeah, like i said verses are o.k, bad production, wrong beat... Audio Assistance has lots of usefull shit... sounds like your using a crystal mic, or have it down your throat... if the first is the case invest, and if the second, step away a little bit... keep dropping...1

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