ok....first off flow is straight...but rhyme scheme is pretty simple...wit only end rhymes..i can only hear a lil bit of multis...and u wasnt on snare...some lines were to long...i dont care about the beat but if u want to kno it aint that good to me...lyrics is ok...i cant really judge ckuz its about ya life and i dont kno u so yea...ROFLROFLROFLROFL...omfg...u rushed the hell out of that damn line..ROFL
man dat was funny ckuz everything just speed up hella fast..
i hear hella hiss as well..
and i cant really tell the difference between the chorus and the verse...