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Old 03-07-05, 11:29 PM   #1
metaman
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Voted For: Judicial

vocab: gotta give judicial the nod here. multi's were there and rhyme scheme was kept in tact, lines were a bit stretched though. medicine, you need to elevate in this area. your vocab was simple and thus your structure was also simple.

punches: simple structure with weak punches doesn't do well in battles. judicial takes this easily... wordplay was good, creativity was there, and punches hit hard. medicine you had some good attempts, but the simple vocab, structure, and lack of wordplay weakened this verse majorly.

overall both guys gave a good effort but judicial just had the harder hitting verse and so he gets my vote.

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