Voted For: Murdz

oh shit... this was a good verse for a newbie(no offense)...
aye look... murdz got this one
his flow was tight and the rhyme scheme was pretty good.
he wasn't all punches, but his lines came pretty hard. i like the humor involved in this drop! haha
overall, he just had good line after good line. this shows u dont need all punches to win a battle. the finisher was hott... it went right along with his battle stucture, hahah
transcript... u had a decent verse. ur flow was pretty nice too but ur only problem was that u didnt come hard enough. there was no punches or real disses involved in ya verse.
and the little self glorification u did kinda hurt ur verse...
w/e
V/ Murdz