some nice shit dogg
structure could use some work...
decent wordplay, the concept of the peice was good, some wit an humour about a few of your lines too, closed the peice nicely, it had a bit little bit of everythin' in there, some decent stuff dogg, just improve your structure, besides that theres not much u can fault about this, good lookin out fam

go check our forum, sign in for week 1 if u havnt already, new threads an stuff up, crew mission is up so ta be sure ta earn your wager by completing the misson, go check the forum dogg an just post what u want in there

nice drop, propps to you dogg, 7/10 for this

Peace out

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