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Old 03-08-05, 06:32 PM   #2
Dabatos
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hahaha... wow man this is a good verse.. i really liked the twist at the end.. At first i thought you were thinking of killing someone with your hand.. yeah i know wierd of me to think that.. then shortly after that i thought like.. oh.. wen u sed u have no limit or something like that i thought u were talking about writting a topical verse or something.. then thats wut i thought till the end wen u said the college thing?? haha good emotion... and good twist..

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plz leave feed on my poem..

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