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Old 03-08-05, 07:53 PM   #1
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From: Bethany ontario canada
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Voted For: Cincanatus

nice job dawg i liked that structural idea it was nice better structure better hits better opener and closer
dont explain what you meant in the rap cuz it just makes it shitty aight

hey buck learn how to make sense
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