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Old 03-08-05, 08:41 PM   #8
metaman
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Voted For: J-Money

i thought this was a pretty basic battle...
j-money had a simple structure and flow, but i guess that's better than stretched lines and kinda screwy structure

vocab was basic, wordplay was aight from j-money's side (i was diggin the boat line, but could've been worded better)

whatup most of your punches were self-glorifying and so they came off kinda weak and weren't hitting... work on developing your wordplay and keeping a consistent flow throughout your verse and you'll elevate in no time dog, vocab on your end was tight

overall, gotta give it to j-money, no hate

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