Voted For: OMEGA*
Omega got this one easily.. his first bar alone was so sick that it eat phive's whole verse..
Phive work on that structure, put it into lines not a sentence like you got em, it messes up the flow the structure and its harder to find a punch like that.
overall: 4/10
Omega your first and last bar were your best ones.. you had good metas in all your bars and some dope punches.. good wordplay here and there.. you should try using more personals though, they really grab the readers attention but you had a dope verse either way
overall : 8/10
Vote: Omega
Return the favor with a honest vote please!
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...d.php?p=2011362