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Old 03-08-05, 11:08 PM   #12
metaman
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Voted For: Young Blaze

i think this was pretty one-sided, structure and flow was tight by young, wordplay was there and punches hit hard... that laxative line was DOPE, lol

royal you had some punches, lines were a bit stretched and vocab was weak... word your punches better and incorporate some wordplay and you'll be a lot better dog

overall i think blaze took this pretty easily, no hate

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