Voted For: Lil C

Opener - Lil C, Jets didnt compare to hers.
Closer - Lil C, Jet trailed off into words rather than lines at the end.
Punches - Lil C, Jets werent as creative at all.
Personals - Jet, had more.
Metas - Lil C, Jets attemps were weak.
Multies - Lil C, Jet had only like 1 sorta.
Vocab - Lil C, look at Jets...
Structure - Neither, wasnt feeling either.

Areas of Improvement:

Carson - Not to be a jackass, that was garbage yo. As you can prolly tell I wasnt feelin your verse at all and I am 100% positive that Im not the only kat that feels this way. The polls will show. I think you def. need to fix your structure. For starters lose the ........ at the end of ya lines. Next, make them longer. Also try making your punches funnier - metas usually help in the comedy area. And that vocab needs to be fixed, I mean your most tech word was oompa loompa. damn. I think you need to elevate in the right direction....up. Either that or stick to audio kid.

Lil C - Dope verse. But not flawless. I see that you are new so I will give you some pointers for your next battle that I want you to use. So listen...you dont have to number your lines, lose that next time. Also If you are going to have your lines that long in your battles I suggest changing your font size to font size 1. This is so that it all fits into the same line nicely, cause your bars look too crammed up and extended. And iunno, unless your feelin them try using a comma instead of those ~'s. I think if you listened to what I just told you, in your next battle it will make you sound more like a rook instead of a newb when you spit. So remember those things and good job on this win.

V/Lil C.................................................