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This was feedback posted for Dex
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ok you win nuff siad
you had hella multies which where honestly all wack, but your strucuture was decent, could have used some personals and some wordplay or atleast have some punches, your whole verse was fucking fillers, try to eleavte alot more, once you get about 30 wins you will be good, just stay up and dont leave the site becuase you will eleavte soon enuff
Kordozar...Ok that font color shit was wack you need to first fix that then go back and work on your strucuture you the prime example on why records are worthless, alos you had some decent shit but you loose becuase your font color and your strucuture, nuff said
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