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Old 03-09-05, 12:58 PM   #14
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alright......this wasnt much to explain here

decree...you came out, actually making punches that connected and worked, your flow and structure were alright, not the greatest, vocab and wordplay were alright too....overall, your verse had some nice punches, it looked like a verse, and i didnt laugh at you at all during it

evil genious....all your punches are played to sssshhhit....first bar...stretched to hell, then your structure went and ate shit, horrible, i dunno man, you really need to work on structure/flow/ccreativity in punches....or good punches in that sense, word, elevate.......

v/decree
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