Voted For: Architect

Architect
structure is good.. flow is on target.. you had good transitions from line to line.. your imagery was above average.. as was the emotion.. overall i thought you went about the topic in a chill way.. it was an interesting read..

Drama Queen
structure is good.. flow is also on target.. you didnt transition between lines at all.. your imagery was alright.. sometimes it seemed it wasnt very good though.. emotion was good.. overall i dont really like the way you went about portraying the topic.. it seemed it should have been elaborated more..

Overall
both had a good structure and flow.. both had some pretty nice emotion.. Archtict had the better transitions in between lines.. as well better imagery and i liked the way he went about discussing the topic more.. so.. basing off of that.. I got Architect taking this.. pretty good battle yo..

VOTE - ARCHITECT

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