Voted For: Drama Queen

Alright alright...this was a very close battle in my opinion. Lemme critique what I liked and disliked about both verses:

Drama Queen:

Your verse was deep girl. I enjoyed reading yours a bit more than Arch because you stayed on topic really well. I think the topic "Light throught a Window" leaves both of yall to basically be able to go wherever you want with the verse. I really like the way you went with it. Your verse was kinda mysterious which I also enjoyed. It really made me have to read it over a second time to put it all together. I think your vocab was not bad. But I think after reading arch's verse it made your vocab seem a bit more elementary. Mabye next time try to up your vocab a bit to match your opponents. Also, maybe change your verse structuring for topicals too next time. Because against a verse like Arch's, made it look a little bit less advanced. But like I said, I really enjoyed reading yours because of how you went into detail abou tthe window and how it tied in with your topical. Very well done.

Architect:

Your verse was pretty good dawg. All around very strong. I really enjoyed your choice of diction. Your vocab was very descriptive and enabled me to invision what was going on better. Also, your verse structuring was very neat and organized. pretty much an all around solid verse. However...I wasnt really feeling the way you went with your topic. Like no hate or anything, I just feel it could have been so much better. If your feeling it tho Im glad but compared to Dramas I dont think its was as good topic-wise. I donno if the polls will show that you took this or if she took this but it was a very good battle between the both of yall. honest vote.

V/Drama Queen...............

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